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 Comments Ahh, thank you for the critique again! QUQ
And for the floating trees... yeahhh. I was a bit frustrated and gave up on fixing them...? I wasn't considering the shadows much either.  I'm pay more attention next time, onee-chan. >U< Thank you again!   no worries <3 love seeing your new art!!!
how did you do the leaves on the ground oUo and such a beautiful painterly feel! Thank you. ;U;
I seem to be getting into the painterly type of colouring lately. XD And for the leaves, (which I used the same for both the ground and treetops) I used a custom brush I installed in SAI and sort of flicked the pen to make little patches, I guess. >U< Would you like me to go and find the brushes pack I got the brush from? :3 |
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Here you go! It's also has instructions on how to install them if you don't know, and a FAQ too in case you get stuck. ^U^
Good: I love the use of colour and lighting in this piece, a beautiful composition and also idea!!! The warmth of autumn is contrasted by a slightly cold green pair of mesmerizing eyes and it's so nice and cozy! Her expression is beautiful, as well as the shading on her clothes and the small details of lace in this piece!!! I don't even know how you did the painterly leaves on the ground xD *teach me >w<* Holy gosh...how did you draw feet 0.0
Improvements: Overall the artwork is very grey in tone value, not a lot of dark areas to being out the character in the middle. Maybe work on adding darker shadows in some areas to really bring out her character as well as the beautiful scenery. The trees in the background could have more detail and outline as well as darker shadows. The trees don't look like they're on the ground, but rather, floating. More defined shadows for the trees and ground will improve this ^^
Overall, this is an amazing improvement >w< Can't wait to see your new works!