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My New ID- Since my Miku one was a bit...weird...
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Super cute as always~ And I see the rose obsession hasn't left yet. XD But I'm finding a few mistakes. I wasn't planning on writing a critic, but I ended up with enough words. So yeah. ^^

First of all, I immediately saw that the thumb of her left (our right) hand is much too short. The thumb usually reaches just below the first joint of the first finger. Second is that the figure's neck looks odd. It's a touch too long, and weird on the left side where the neck connects to the shoulder. The bottom sort of fans out and makes it look even more awkward. Her left forearm is too long as well, since in proper anatomy, the forearm is shorter than the upper arm. Unless it's a trick of perspective, then I'm not sure.

Besides those, everything else is greatl! I love how you made the cord of the tablet into your signature, and the details on the tablet and ruffles on the sleeves are great! The light on her hair from her face bothers me a little though. Is the light actually shining from her face? That would explain why the inner part of her hair is lit. But I especially love the background. It ties the picture together for me. It's another wonder piece of work!